Fantasy Dream Poem by James Kiser

Fantasy Dream

Rating: 4.3


For once in my life I’m
Up, up so high I can touch the sky.
Climbing, excited for what comes next,
Keeping the negative out,

And all the great beauty within.
Lucky for all that surrounds me,
Loving, caring is all I see from those close to me.

Opened to new adventures,
Finally being free.

There couldn’t be anything,
Here to change the path I see,
Inspiring new dreams within me.
Sadly this will never happen to me.

Monday, August 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this in five mins late at night, do not judge. Do not read to far into it just a quick 'side-liner'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 03 August 2015

A fantasy of many ordinary people, James. Nice write

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Roseann Shawiak 03 August 2015

Starting out to be so positive and uplifting, then in the last verse saying, Sadly this will never happen to me. Gives me pause for thought, James. Then I realized what the title was, Fantasy Dream. Good one, you has me stymied for a second there. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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