Fantasy Fictious Bet! Poem by Azitej Anand

Fantasy Fictious Bet!

Rating: 5.0


A fantasy bet of skies beauty,
Shows Moon's arrogancy for aesthetic fame;
Stars with silk light,
Joins the fame of moon's beauty game:

Bet to be loved by humans,
'So much care and loves me', flutters on Moon's lips;
Out of many stars, a Star descends to play the bet,
Came at same altitude, for deteriorating moon's adamant grip;

Humans, a mamal inside materialstic skin,
To proove this to Moon, Star engarbs earth's blanket of surviving skill;
Human eyes start floating on Star sham outward look,
Start praising and calling Star a 'New Moon' for aspiration drill:

Soon they adapt on fake Star,
And to keep it safe they start throwing nuclear waste on adamant Moon;
The whole universe claps on it,
Either a Venus or a Mars starts laughing soon:

The king Sun here roars,
Miniature are humans, I had already lost my daughter earth;
You are a babby moon,
there was also a time,
when illusion, 'to be loved by humans', persisted in earth mind that still evokes her for last breath;

You have lost your deal,
As per rules you have to serve stars, our ancestor;
A laughing voice said,
'Just take my words and me as a consultor:

No need to serve us,
Just empowers your self and blows everything in future projected on your surface directly;
And My love, for your safety,
I made holes on you, so that in future you never trapped again in the claws of lofty adamant beauty.

Fantasy Fictious Bet!
Monday, April 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy fiction
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Fantasy fictious bet', is a fantasy story in poetic veil marks the essence of metaphor, that surely adds a pleasure taste to reader while going through the poem. The poem introduces us with two protagonist that is Moon, an adamant figure, on the other hand Star, a noble figure tended to break this adamant nature of Moon, who thinks that humans love him for the sake of his unique beauty. A bet was made between Moon and Star where Star creates an illusion of earth environment which gains an attention of miniature that is we humans. They called this earth illusion by the name 'New Moon' and start residing there. At there all of them decides that they would not pollute the new moon and throw all there wastes especially nuclear wastes on moon. At these words of first man on New Moon made both mars and venus laugh and finally moon looses the bet. Sun roars to say that Moon you have lost your bet, now you have to serve our ancestor that are Stars. Suddenly a voice with applaud fuse that 'Moon, no need to serve me and you have to follow my words that you should blow anything that lands on you for your future protection I made holes on your surface as you would not in future once again get trapped by your beauty arrogance. Here the whole poem ends with multidimensional theme for readers.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 13 April 2015

A wonderful and well written piece, Azitej. Thank you for sharing. Peace

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Azitej Anand 14 April 2015

Thankyou so much sir for praising my piece of work! Thanks for your kind appreciation...

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