Thursday, September 17, 2009

Fantasy Vs Reality Comments

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Running away and joining the circus
crosses my mind through out the day
I'll flag down a rainbow colored carousel
and ride away on a brightly painted fantasy
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Theresa Ann Moore
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Rani Turton 17 September 2009

Very original and nice to read, Theresa. Thanks.

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Jean Dament 17 September 2009

I like how you wove a story of escaping to a fantasy place & then getting back to reality in the end. An enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Look for my poem that is similiar called 'Life is like a Carnival.' Ravensong

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Theresa Ann Moore

Theresa Ann Moore

Michigan, U.S.A.
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