Far Away Poem by Kathryn Miller

Far Away

Rating: 5.0


I am far away from you,
And I am blue,
I see the ocean outside,
And think of you,
Everyday you are in my thoughts,
I miss you so much,
I really want to talk to you,
I want to be with you,
I want to see you,
But I can’t because I am far away from you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 08 July 2006

So sad Kathryn, I hope that all is well with you at the moment, I love the simplicity of this write, sometimes we can over- complicate what we are really trying to say, this however reachs the reader intact of all feeling like a hand felt in the palm of our heart I've given this one a 12 so don't worry when you only see a ten in the voting box, you'll know what it really means love duncan x

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