Far Away Poem by Blustery Blaze

Far Away

Rating: 5.0


I'm intensely curious,
something about you,
my attentions attract,
i'm not inculpated you,
gravity does it, exact.

I wonder why,
you let me in just to push me out,
i watch you from far away,
So far away until my mind goes blackout.

I watch you from far away,
And i don't wan to let you know why,
Something about you,
Make me a little shy.

I watch you from far away,
And i pursue you in some different ways,
I know that we're not bonny and clyde,
But why can't we be friends anyway?

Far Away
Monday, May 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: crush,heartbreak,love,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 14 May 2018

Deep passionate feelings elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Beautiful love poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A lovely creation Blustery. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 May 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Blustery Blaze. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 May 2018

Something about you, Make me a little shy.........why cant we be friends anyway? desire, secret love and adoring....... life and its feeling. very well expressed dear poet. tony

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