Godspower Oshodin

Rookie - 135 Points (Lagos Nigeria)

Farewell Love! - Poem by Godspower Oshodin

The whistling of a howling plight
Ringing with echoes of bitter night
Soar with a unfurl of love touch
Coming deep so intricate, and I gush
It real up like a noisy air
I graze and walk in fear
I dash to this holy bitterness
Showing no iota of kindness
It’s uneasy to tell though of this story
How it cheated and gave no glory
I measure up this sighs in my heart
It is stumbling and intact
It came with no trunk of it best
And push me to a holy zest.
It string and strike strong
On whatever ways it goes wrong
I join this coterie that has given
And from it zenith, none has taken
It’s so hard to go with out a resolve
But I compromise with a farewell to love.

Comments about Farewell Love! by Godspower Oshodin

  • (5/11/2010 11:30:00 AM)

    your ending is very nice and meaningful.
    take care
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  • (5/6/2010 2:21:00 PM)

    I love how you describe it..
    amazing feeling of words
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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 3, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, May 14, 2010

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