Friday, January 8, 2016

Farewell, My Friend Comments

Rating: 4.7

The family cries and laughs
however I am incapable of both.
Everyone will grieve and heal
yet the numb of your absence I loathe.
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Alex Rose
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Jak Black 10 January 2016

An honest, heartfelt, depiction of the anguish and pain when we lose a loved one prematurely. Very sad. Keep writing, Alex, it helps.

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Roseann Shawiak 10 January 2016

Very intense and melancholy poem, poignant and heart wrenching also. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Howard Savage 09 January 2016

A strong emotional poem.

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Soul Watcher 09 January 2016

I liked this poem, thank you for sharing. Waiting for more by you.

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Rajnish Manga 08 January 2016

My dear Alexander, there is something very special in your expression which is very appealing to the heart. Thanks. Waiting for your next.

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Alex Rose

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