Tuesday, August 15, 2017

Fatherless Comments

Rating: 4.8

FATHERLESS


I'm the great pretender you'll never see me cry
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Angelic Takudzwa
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Unwritten Soul 15 August 2017

I feel touched by reading this honest poetry, although i am not sure and i dont want to be rude to ask i feel like look at you know you are great, as a person who is mature in thinking and stronger to face all of this alone, of course your father was not there but I am sure he must be proud to know you are doing great as he really wish you to be, we dont know we dont know how proud he is to you, it just he cant be there sadly, but his spirit and his courage in your blood and trust..so he still with you.. :) .

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Takudzwa. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 August 2017

Life is fraud full of deceit, my life unfold over times Abandonment led to a lonely fatherless child i needed you A father is a child first hero ..cruel circumstances which eat away the joys of childhood...... i just can understand how you suffered in your childhood until now...... i needed you is a cry from your depths.. thank you for this emotional and true poem... tony

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Angelic Takudzwa Mungwevi 15 August 2017

it help me to express my feelings according how i grow up and the things i wished for...but didn't happened

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Angelic Takudzwa Mungwevi 15 August 2017

fatherless is one of my favourate poems that i like...it help express my feeling according how i grow up nd how i wish

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Angelic Takudzwa Mungwevi 15 August 2017

ts my favor rate poem

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