Tuesday, August 26, 2014

Faye Comments

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Hope you had a good night's sleep Faye
He coos holding the cup to her lip
Nice isn't it the morn's first sip
And be ready for a lovely day!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 27 August 2014

Nice poem but last line confused me If you can tell me about i will comment later lovely poem I loved the poem so please tell story behind

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 26 August 2014

Feelings of love and concern for the being so well expressed here.........very well scripted.......sir

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