Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 412,198 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Feel Better - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Feel better

Love and share
Pain and grief more
As they are part
Till you depart

Not all people are lucky
So remain sticky
With problems and stand
Firmly with what they like and understand

Life is what we see and analyze
We raise our life or cut to size
Not god alone or divine power
May have enough with them to offer

We make and believe
Then forcefully live
With perception
That is built from inception

Share and enjoy
If that gives you joy
Makes you to feel better and at home
You shall always like to welcome

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/6/2015 9:36:00 AM)


    Doug Groberg Very nice. Thank you for sharing Hasmukh.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/1/2015 10:34:00 AM)


    welcome Scott Ransopher and Nella Loagnod like this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/30/2015 7:24:00 PM)


    Share and enjoy
    If that gives you joy
    Makes you to feel better and at home
    You shall always like to welcome
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2015



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