Feel Fine Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Feel Fine

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Your eyes are like wine
Only you enjoy and feel fine
Love is to be enjoyed
Drink it and stay rejoiced

Why do to ask assurance?
It has happened by chance
You have entered arena at once
Love more and more hence

No, no, you are not slave
Just remain in limit and nicely behave
As it is not the only attraction
But nice and dignified relation

How come it can end so soon?
It may brightly shine in noon
You are like shining star
You can never remain far

My hart beats for you
This is not some what but wholly true
You were he one I loved most
Why do you think of it as expensive with cost?

Love is not mere intoxication
But certainly means to go and create relation
You can swim or sink under its shadow
Better choose the one that may nicely follow

You are expected to perform
Within norm s and inform
To your life partner what you think for future
Hold her hand and positively assure

It may certainly be spell bound
And same is seen and all over found
But its spell must end in best result
Where there should be no concern for insult

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2012

good drkgbalakrishnan kandangath21 hours ago good Comment 1 Comment+1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2012

Elias Foukis21 hours ago Good poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2012

Some Girl A wonderful write, so true.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2012

nightmute I like the mentioning of taking on certain norms when entering a loving relationship, and that is so very true. But what others, not in a loving relationship, see as a 'ball and chain', we, who are in a loving relationship, understand to be a dignified and, ultimately, a freeing set of rules...we grow deeper in love, and as we grow closer together, we two experience exponential growth. Those not in such a relationship often wonder why such peace and harmony is made so evident in the lives of life-long lovers....and though it is never always peaches and cream, as it were, still we find such joys that those who are not in such a relationship cannot comprehend. A joyous write, sir...and an excellent topic to expound on.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 October 2012

Your eyes are like wine Only you enjoy and feel fine

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