Jyotsana Chiruvolu

Rookie (May 8th / Vijayawada)

Feel Of First Love - Poem by Jyotsana Chiruvolu

Great window opens and cool blossoms wagging into the heart
Feeling myself flying on ethereal bed with silky hair flapping against my charismatic cheeks
Making my eyes to see an elegant silhouette shines with aromatic magnetism
Precipitously a rose petal falls on my eyelid wakes me up and takes me into the heaven
Like a star in a candle light with a deep breath whispers into the heart and says I love you…..


Comments about Feel Of First Love by Jyotsana Chiruvolu

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/9/2011 4:40:00 AM)


    Wow, 'tis an amazing write! !
    Fully-feel fill'd! ! ! ! Excellent poem! !
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 7, 2011


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