~~~~~~~feeling~~~~~~~~ Poem by Brett Roberts
~~~~~~~feeling~~~~~~~~
I felt so much more. We were - so much more
A wounded heart exposed, on a hard cold floor.
My love stretches upon this star lit night
Fading right before a masked beauty
Thinking we’d go so far
I felt so much more
Echoing promise for what?
To be torn and tattered
I thought this mattered
A sliding truth, from me to you.
I fought on all fours
Because I thought this was our war
A sliding truth, back and forth
What its worth, I gave my all.
I thought we were so much more.
I thought we felt so much more.
Beautiful lips seductively whisper lies
But I didn’t think it was into my eyes
It’s was my heart, not a game.
I thought we felt the same.
A sliding truth right on top of me.
A heavy weight on my chest.
Can you feel my heart?
Embedded in your scars
I said my heart was yours
Your heart fell for those flowers
Get better beautiful, I prayed for hours
She is still my definition of strength
I thought we were so much more.
I thought we felt so much more.
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B. W. Roberts
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my first love.
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4/25/2024 6:54:38 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I absolutely love how you repeated the first phrase throughout the poem. It added a nice flow to it. Amazing. The details can even put an image in my mind, I love it. (: