Feeling Alone Poem by Danielle Phillips

Feeling Alone

Rating: 5.0


My heart grows colder as you walk away
Nothing will get to me I will say
The more I try the harder it gets
With you my heart goes in bits

I wish this didn't have to be
I wanted it to be just you and me
I put on a face when you walk by
But deep inside all I want to do is cry

You stand there in my face
I can only see you with grace
You can since something is wrong
I know this wont last long

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Declan O Reilly 29 September 2009

This is so descriptive Danielle. It took me to where you are. A snapshot of a moment in your life. That's what makes a good poem great.

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Danny H 29 September 2009

:) much care for this person I assume? . Who was this about, hopefully your over it.

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