Feelings Poem by hari kunisseri

Feelings

Rating: 4.5


My heart beat,
Resonates
A long distance away,
Distinct and clear,
Like a glorious,
Summer's day,

The bonds so strong,
The tugging constant
The dull ache deepens
To silent cries of longing
The lips quiver
come then the
dew dropp tears

oh, for that gentle touch,
the loving embrace,
so secure and warm
in those arms
my feelings rise and rise
to dissolve in a long
shuddering sigh

I await the day
May it not be too far away
To be beside
And
scream,
shriek out
my heartfelt
joy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayanthi Prakash 22 September 2009

I think this is one of your best so far. All the very best and waiting for more to come along. Enjoy your work a lot.

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Jean Dament 20 September 2009

Your poem evokes much emotion & longing. It had a great flow to it. one error 'dew dropp tears'- should be ' dew dropp tears' Thanks for sharing. Ravensong

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