Feels Like Falling Poem by Jose Feliciano

Feels Like Falling

Rating: 3.5


I’ve never felt this way before,
A feeling of total self bliss.
Wanting you day by day,
Just to feel your sweet and warm kiss.

I want you in many ways,
People will never understand.
But I do not care what they think,
Because all I care is to hold your hand.

To one distant day,
That I will never regret.
Feeling you close to me,
Feelings I will never forget.

Oh God help me,
It feels like I am falling.
I can’t take this pain anymore,
For all I am doing is crawling.

I will take this risk,
For I do not understand.
One day to realize,
That this is not what I planned.

I am falling into darkness,
Yet a light of hope still remains
I cannot stop falling and falling,
Yet there is still no bloodstain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joey . 25 October 2009

I agree...it certainly feels as if you never hit the ground, which can be torture if such thing ever happened. But despite you can't see what is going on in my head, I still think you have a great understanding of the situation. Thank you for the feedback.

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