Monday, July 13, 2020

Fell Comments

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On the ground I had fell
I began to scream and yell,
But, no one had heard my plea
When on the ground I had busted my knee.
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Randy McClave
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Kostas Lagos 13 July 2020

The feeling of loneliness, of abandonment and thw lack of help. Impressive writing

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Cowboy Ron Williams 13 July 2020

After I had fallen, why was everybody stallin'? Why didn't they run to help after they heard me yelp?

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Cowboy Ron Williams 13 July 2020

I hope this is a poem from your imagination, and not a true story. If true, it is extremely sad, and not a pleasant world we live in.

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