Felt In My Heart Poem by Mohammad Hassan Naseem

Felt In My Heart

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Oh that day it felt in my heart
Nothing makes me more than that apart,

Life suddenly turned black and white
How colorful was everything when you were by my side,

And now these tears, not stopping at all
Dint had option but to fall,

A place in my heart is still in pain
Hard to know what I lost and what I gained,

Oh that day when we fell apart
Left something t'you from my heart

then we'll talk whatwe dint conveyed

And Blossoms of spring will fall, my friend
on that day when we'll be together again...

Sunday, December 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Found my old diary....wrote it a long time back 5 years from now...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 21 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Hassan. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 03 December 2017

Desperate thoughts on departing and togetherness. Good

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