Finding Something Burning Poem by Annie Jane

Finding Something Burning



Someone lit a fire,
Knowing someone like me would
Find it, feel it… why?

Odd to see flames here,
Strange… it's something wilder than
Matchsticks or candles.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandy Player 11 January 2013

i love the ambiguity of short poems and haikus. this maintains that but still tantalises the reader to an unwritten idea.

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Saadat Tahir 08 May 2012

nice fresh look at an old blaze.... been burning centuries like that.... :) like... The eternal flame at the Monument to the Unknown Soldier in Sofia, Bulgaria yes ultimately they become the unknown soldiers... liked yer lines cheers :)

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