Monday, April 16, 2007

Fire Fighter Comments

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Ashes of your love rain down from the skies,
so I keep my head down so they won't sting my eyes,
The smoke envelopes me, but the flames drive me out.
The tar fills my lungs as my heart fills with doubt.
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Seth Proch
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Preeti - is here! 17 April 2007

I love the vividness of this poem. Nice writing style..

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Seth Proch

Seth Proch

Bennington, VT
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