Lifetime Present Poem by Tsireledzo Masindi

Lifetime Present

Rating: 5.0


Hey
I know I wasn't there on your birthday
I thought it is what you wished so I did it your way
That feeling was not so pleasant
But I thought my absence would be a great present.

When I was with you, I didn't take things serious
Now that you got someone am very jealous.
I would love to be yours again
I cant take anymore of this pain.

I see girls but develop no lust
My love, what we had can not just be the past.
my special one, its you that I love
feelings for you always stand above.

Friday, October 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this poem is actually a story of a guy who mistreated his girlfriend when he had the chance and it was on her birth month so he thought letting her go would be a good present but now he cant live without her.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tshiruruvhela Vincent 13 July 2021

Bra keep it up u r the best

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Chinedu Dike 10 February 2018

Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly - appearing unannounced and may leave without warning, if it's not nurtured by both couples at all times to maintain its bliss. The poem is a witty reflection on the whimsical and temperamental nature of love. Lovely and very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing bro.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 01 December 2017

Nice write, Tsireledzo....you may like to read my poems: To Whom It May Concern thanks

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 October 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Tsireledzo. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Tsireledzo Masindi 03 November 2017

thanks for taking time and read my poem, I will be sure to read yours and get you lot of readers that I know.

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Hanani village. tshimbupfe
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