First Love First Pain Poem by Thomas Golding

First Love First Pain

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She curls on the couch
Tears stain the cushion
streak down her cheeks
Wide open window
Frigid South wind
Bruises her loss
As life flows
To the pillow
First love
First pain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Pandey 13 February 2009

succinct yet compendious.. very nice indeed

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Ana Zaldivar 07 February 2009

Such a short poem but full of meaning.. I really admire that from someone... being able to create emotion and images to the reader by short words.. lovely written... best wiches, ana

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Thomas Golding

Thomas Golding

Lower Hutt. Wellington. New Zealand
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