First Self Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

First Self

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Those who love thee love self too
consider life as treasure lying at bottom of sea shelf
Soul forms medium to speak
words may seem slow but not weak

Language may be slow but easy
Life may be made simple but busy
Behavior and movement is extra ordinary
Love speaks and demonstrates what is necessary

Eyes speak and tongue fails
Action reveals and enters deal
Brotherhood spreads and love excels
There is nothing else to tell

It is just humanly behavior
Not done for any honor
But for large cause
Non- stop or without any pause

To seek less is to expect more
Efforts double and energy is stored
Poor and needy certainly benefit
With much of happiness and comfort

So love self than anybody else
Feel your self with presence
Body is working and mind is at rest
You are delivering what is best

Feel great with lovely smile
Deliver whatever you can meanwhile
Pray for your being in this beautiful world
Think as one of the best creatures and none to second

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lily Mccambridge 08 November 2013

This is lovely. Can I have a real name? It's only fair

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Ritika George 22 October 2018

I really liked the poem. Its all about loving oneself first.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2013

Those who love thee love self too consider life as treasure lying at bottom of sea shelf

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2013

very good dave cornell11 minutes ago very good keep writing Comment +1 Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2013

Danielle Walker11 minutes ago Really liked this poem. I think you can be better though. Comment +1 Good pictures

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2013

u Brett Sharp11 minutes ago Good read & visual

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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