Monday, June 1, 2015

First Things First Comments

Rating: 4.5

The boundary lamps were yellow blurs
Against the winter night,
And I had checked the last ship in
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Gill Robb Wilson
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Allotey Abossey 02 June 2015

You write well, keep it coming

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Chinedu Dike 01 June 2015

The intricacies of pilots job well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.➕9

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Gill Robb Wilson

Gill Robb Wilson

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