Young Church

Freshman - 784 Points (Lesotho, Maseru)

First Time We Met - Poem by Young Church

First time we met I just knew it
I felt something inside of me
I felt something move in me
Lost my breath in your spaceship
The beauty I saw with my eyes
Dazzled like a galaxy before me

I just knew it you are the one
The day I believed in magic

First time we met I just knew it
The book of your heart opened
Sweet, kind, caring, loving, selfless
Were written all over your heart
Scroll like you in this century unbelievable
Heavens must be smiling down on me

I just knew it you are the one
I would never forget your creator

First time we met I just knew it
I would not have to hide myself at all
I would laugh like a breaking glass
Your love would make me weep
I would talk about you at the spa
I knew your love was priceless

I just knew it you are the one
Look how far we have gone now.


***The Book of Passion

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life


Comments about First Time We Met by Young Church

  • Jazib Kamalvi (8/16/2017 6:27:00 AM)


    A nice poetic imagination, Young. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • Heaven's Authority (1/28/2016 10:00:00 PM)


    I like the use of using space and love together, that's really something in it and of itself! (Report) Reply

  • Rosie Bourget (1/10/2016 5:02:00 PM)


    Awesome text, very well illustrated. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 10, 2016

Poem Edited: Monday, January 11, 2016


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