A Useless Poem Poem by Young Church Poetry

hahaha i just love Young Church, you are always honest and that's the best part of your poetry.nice useless piece.lol

A very sad and gripping poem. It hurts me to think that people feel that they are worthless. Your words were very eye opening. Excellent poem!

Very good Poet! But how about change the title? A Useful POem! ! ! ! ! Thanks for invite me, really! ! ! !

I know the meaning....when behave something bad it equal to useless poem..is it? _Soul

loss of life in a drain loss of youth/ with the message this one is not useless

You gave your name as Yong church. and the themes spoken in the first stanza is of a man and in the second stanza is of a girl. please do not say have heard of this god but I do not care.. but GOD CARES FOR YOU MY DEAR POET: that is why he made u write such a poem. thank you . tony

'I see no difference between me and this useless poem'. It comes across as a sad poem to me, that one can be alive, vibrant, able to do anything and yet waste this temporary life on foolishness. Things that tear down spirits and self- esteem, also reflect in poetry as if it is a mirror. This poem reflects the usefulness of the person in sending a message to other young people to open their eyes before it's too late. Excellent poem! ! I give it a 10! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Catchy title. The poem is infinitely better than the person described in the poem. A nice piece. Thanks for sharing.

Original and sassy full of uncontrollable young people living life in a sad way! Thanks for sharing this great write

wow, this is a useful poem...very good.....tnx.....for the poem and the invite