Ben Coomer

Rookie (5/21/1993 / Duvall)

Fix My Broken Soul - Poem by Ben Coomer

a friend is dead
these sky blue eyes tainted red
numb, from the cruel vicious fight
and aching, from lack of light

searching for a sliver of hope
searching, for the light

can you mend my broken heart?
sow the pieces that were torn apart?

can you remove the lines that i have crossed?

i will pay, whatever the cost
please just lead me, so i am no longer lost

can you take my darkened soul?
to paint it white is my goal

when i see your face
will i finally feel your loving grace?
will i rejoice when you fill this hole?
can you fix my broken soul?


Comments about Fix My Broken Soul by Ben Coomer

  • (5/24/2010 2:27:00 PM)


    omg! i love this poem ben! its really good (Report) Reply

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  • (5/22/2010 1:17:00 PM)


    nice poem dude, very good (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 12, 2010



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