Sunday, January 28, 2007

' Flame ' Comments

Rating: 2.6

An ecru jar candle burns ~
Vanilla fragrance fills the room
The flame flickers brightly
Banishing an oppressive gloom.
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Carmela Patterson
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Hans Vr 06 September 2013

Superb, fantastically written, melodious with great content I love this poem very much Keep writing, Mel

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Jean Dament 01 July 2010

I enjoyed this poem about the fire & light dispelling the gloom with reference to the Lord doing the same for us. Well done. Spiritsong

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Carmela Patterson

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