aiden murdock

Rookie (Feburary 16,1992 / Maryland)

Flattered Her Angel - Poem by aiden murdock

a message she sends
to her friend
conversation begins
as she mentions her devil
Her friend must blind thy eyes
from the hurt
But no way to evade this endless hurt
For it will rise again
She must smile and forget
The forgetting of such hurt
is a quagmire
Her feelings have killed her
She must become what she has
such contempt for
A sycophant of bliss to her
enemies and disguised devils


Comments about Flattered Her Angel by aiden murdock

  • (8/16/2006 4:45:00 AM)


    Praiseworthy.Aiden all were masked in this world and it's very hard to recognize the genuine.......and remove other's mask also against the rules.? This life of melodrama rehearse by a dictator? (Report) Reply

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  • (8/2/2006 10:32:00 PM)


    For if one never remembers they are apt to forget in entrapment. Oh, the perpetual self of self! Excellent write! (Report) Reply

  • Tailor Bell (8/2/2006 9:44:00 PM)


    How apropos, Aiden. Well woven confrontations and truth. A deep roller, you. -T. Bell (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 2, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, August 20, 2010


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