Thursday, March 26, 2015

Fledgling Bird At My Door Comments

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Fledgling bird where on earth do you hope to hop to
If you stretch your wings around my yard
After all this baking hot desert heat
Come evening surely you won't deny me your faith
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Mark Heathcote
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Valsa George 11 September 2015

This is such an arresting write! I always feel that many including I have a run of the mill verse. Unfortunately many poems can be likened to fledglings hopping and hopping, lacking full grown wings to soar high! Enjoyed much Mark!

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