Fleeting Poem by ann onn

Fleeting

Rating: 3.3


Sidewalk kisses in the dark
Because I love you but I can’t
Living for each moment past
Living for each moments pass
Loving you in a moment's past
Because I love you but I shan’t
These passing moments break my heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 19 December 2011

The passing momments can break our hearts if ony we are in love! ! ! A good poem! !

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 May 2011

Great poem with a lot of wisdom. Wonderfully written. Great imagery. Fine poetics. A big...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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