Floating On Poem by Garett Ryan

Floating On

Rating: 5.0


You keep your dreams close
And it makes me smile
For every breath you take makes it worthwhile.
We shared true love.
And that is not a lie
You made me luckier than any other guy.
I’ve never met someone quite like you, god that’s so true
You’re so genuine and kind, it’s no wonder why I couldn’t get you off my mind.
The night we met so crazy and true, you took my heart with your baby blues
And the night I told you I loved you I nearly broke down.
Mere you make me crazy.
And always will so remember my heart you’ll never have to steal
I hope we talk and not grow to far apart
Because Meredith you’ll always have my heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julie Schleppegrell 06 June 2013

This is a sweet poem for your love. Nicely written ;) Dallas Neighbor... Definitely a 10 for you.

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Richardson Greg 03 June 2013

Don't be so caught up with rhyming. If it isn't forced, rhyme all you want, but don't be shackled by the desire to rhyme. Try using half-rhyme as well. Keep up the good work!

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