Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 211,443 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Flux - Poem by Kelly Kurt

First snowfall, rained into submission
Pristine white morphs to mud brown
Beautiful in its own way

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about Flux by Kelly Kurt

  • (1/20/2016 9:42:00 AM)

    Wow; I was thinking just a couple of days ago about all the snow we get here in west-Michigan, lake-effect snow from Lake Michigan just a few miles west of where I live. I was wondering, if the snow was brown would it be as pretty? Well now, thanks to you, I know, yes it would! Thank you! Beautiful words here Kelly. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/20/2016 11:26:00 AM)

    Another light dusting fell last night and covered the brown

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/26/2015 11:42:00 PM)

    The brown mud couldn't pristine the frozen water and started looking at the sky for the sun who may melt the snow. Liked this deep observation and beautiful description. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/27/2015 3:16:00 PM)

    Thank you, Akhtar. There is beauty in everything

  • Souren Mondal (11/26/2015 9:46:00 AM)

    Maybe what's beautiful in one often covers the ugly.. Thanks for sharing Kelly.. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/26/2015 4:06:00 PM)

    After a blizzard just 5 days ago, it is 40 degrees warmer and raining hard all day today. The somberness of the vista is lovely to me.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 26, 2015

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