I gave her flowers
Her smile among the roses
Two bouquets I see
I was amazed with the beauty of this lovely Haiku. I can imagine how difficult it was it to decide whether the bouquet was more colorful than the smile of my friend or it was a lovely pink smile. The aroma of flowers! But the perfume of her her silken hairs! Well my friend has a lovely heart for me, not even a rose is more pretty than my friend.
Thanks so very much for your gracious and kind remarks Akhtar Jawad. I'm honored
Lovely piece of poetry, well conceived and elegantly crafted in persuasive expressions from the heart. Thanks for the insightful Haiku.
A lovely piece of poetry, well conceived and elegantly crafted in persuasive expressions from the heart. Thanks for the insightful Haiku.
Thanks very much for your gracious and kind remarks. Akhtar Jawad. Im grateful
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Two bouquets I see.......... flower and her smile........ her smile is like the second bouquet.. soo fine a comparison. heart touching love. .. beautiful.. tony