Foil Poem by Naveed Akram

Foil



Foil is like a herb of metallic strength,
It cries like a butter of oil with food,
As tears of the cry, as tears of the cry.

Foil is a tin, and small are causes that
Decide a tiny whim, a silent crying -
Food is believable, food has contentment.

Foil has many strokes of heat,
On the tearing action I agree to be soft,
So authors please listen to the weaning.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Winnie Berains 17 January 2008

Somehing has been lost in translation I fear.

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Naveed Akram

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London, England
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