Font Color=darkvioletcold Poem by Jane Meyer

Font Color=darkvioletcold

Rating: 5.0


He takes my hand,
and wraps it in his.
“It’s so cold! ” he exclaims.
“Why is that? ' he asks.
For it’s the peak of summer,
in the sunny state of Florida.

I hadn’t noticed it was cold.
It’s the same as the rest of me.
And with my lack of response,
he wraps his arms around me,
asking with concern, “Why are you so cold? ”

This time I have an answer.
One he may not want to hear.
“I’m always cold, ” I say,
“I have been for a while.”

“And why is that, you think? ”

I pause for a moment,
Considering what I’m about to say.
And with my next breath these words come out:
“Because my heart stopped beating a long time ago.”

(inspired by Darkness Everywhere’s “It’s winter and it’s oh so cold”)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
HaZeM PaKKaR 22 August 2009

wonderful short story.. it has been added to MyPoemList! !

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~ Jon London ~ 14 July 2009

Jane, this touches....the voice of love now empty of feeling....the spirit that contains the inner smile....no longer warms the heart with the light of love for the other....very well composed piece my lovely.....you continue to grow with each new piece my friend....your works are a true reminder of your natural talent...keep penning

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