Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 421,662 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

For Correction - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Love is colorless
But brings smile on face
With many changes from time to time
And hold it with fe4elings divine

Not all may look from fixed angle
But struggle
To define
And suffer as if faced by famine

But one thing is sure
To secure
The lovely place
One must always sacrifice

It is simple white color
With peace and surrender
You may always wonder
What kind feeling is this to enjoy and assure?

It needs trust
So insist
For correction at each stage
And skillfully manage

Topic(s) of this poem: poem


Comments about For Correction by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2015 4:20:00 AM)


    It needs trust
    So insist
    For correction at each stage
    And skillfully manage
    (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Read all 1 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags


Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 23, 2015



[Report Error]