indira babbellapati

Rookie - 106 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

For Him I Know Not: Ii - Poem by indira babbellapati

and then the jasmine creeper
that bloomed in the extreme
north west corner of the house
whispered many a smiles to
the full bright moon last night
i don't really know what conspired
between the creeper and the moon
the moon bathed in the perfume
crawled into my room with a few
petals still hanging down the neck
i stretch my moon-cuddled hands
for you to rest your weary head
in the scented softness and i
i blew the petals with
as much strength as i could
that you bathe in the scent
on this cool summer evening...

30apr2010
18.59hrs


Comments about For Him I Know Not: Ii by indira babbellapati

  • (5/3/2010 12:53:00 AM)


    such a romance with nature....jasmine creeper....and the moon bathed on the perfume...crawled into my room. Must be a sweet- scented dream. Lovely write. Enjoy the read of rich metaphors playing with nature's jewels. Thanks for sharing.

    Leonard
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 30, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 18, 2010


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