For Long Years Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

For Long Years

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Hellish atmosphere
Makes me shiver
With unknown fear
As wind flows in from rear

No one knows
When it will stop or go
Making all thoughts carried away
Life has find no favorable way

Old age is worrying a lot
Person’s attention is always caught
Son pushes aged parents on road
How much is worry and load?

So it is has become paramount
All worries take driver’s seat and mount
For years you brought them out from childhood
Now they can not afford for you one day food

Human life has become cheap
you can not even peacefully weep
You are feeling no use of present age
It is now burden on carriage

For long years, you carried them on shoulder
Taken full and complete responsibility with care
Now you seem to be unwanted in their house
What can you think more with grouse?

It is love lost game with winds onslaught
It is between some love and no love caught
Let us pray “Love remains with no losses’
Family tradition remains intact and does not suffer

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 February 2014

Hellish atmosphere Makes me shiver

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 February 2014

Understandable Talisha Allen4 minutes ago Great job describing how life was back in the day compared to now.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 February 2014

take's skill Nathaniel Reamann4 minutes ago good technique, keep it up Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 February 2014

not in a reading mood Not Important6 minutes ago but you've built up enough credibility for a random five Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2014

Sheila Ann Anderson very well said poem, this is very sad but true it seems in many places all over the world 8 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 3 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2014

welcome jairam ji a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 February 2014

Rohani Daud Wonderful poem..Let's pray together.. 10 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 February 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome remirez mericel a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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