Blame Me Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Blame Me

Rating: 4.9


Blame me for everything,
Spare me for nothing,
I left behind special thing,
My memory to miss something,

It was to last and something to cherish,
Till I am forgotten and completely perished,
My soul still roams and not finished,
Blot on old cloths removed andwashed

I was awaiting a simple death,
To live alive in memory and breath,
So till last I may have say,
With beautiful time and day

All dues and regards I pay,
Still she may have all the say,
She may have hopes in sun rays,
I still hesitate and remember in many ways,

I will remain calm and narrate,
Always grant her higher the rate,
May be it was my fate,
What to write and what to state,

I had simple memory as clean slate,
I may be called or addressed as late,
I may have long wait to decide the fate
Before it is. All over and nothing to state

Blame Me
Monday, June 1, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: fate,may,memory
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sangita Rao 03 September 2009

It was to last and something to cherish, Till I am forgotten and completely perished, My soul still roams and not finished, Blot on old cloths removed andwashed.......10

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Venkat Ramanna 16 August 2009

ishall share it all...10

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K.v. Subbarao 16 August 2009

pass onblameto me....10

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Darshna Chopra 13 August 2009

ishall take on me everything....10

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Chetna Purohit 13 August 2009

blame me for everything i shall take it...good one....10

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Bharati Nayak 17 October 2024

I was awaiting a simple death, To live alive in memory and breath, So till last I may have say, With beautiful time and day----Such beautiful words will stay for ever.

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Bharati Nayak 28 March 2023

Blame me for everything, Spare me for nothing, I left behind special thing, My memory to miss something, ----Hasmukh Amanthlalji, you have left your signature in 26347 poems.Time will always remember you through your poems!

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Gaui Þorsteinsson 09 June 2022

I really liked this poem. Thank you ❤

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Mayra Cerda 06 February 2010

I agree with gloria massengo i love this poem it's nice and well thought out impressive 10/10

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g black black 01 December 2009

I LOVE THIS POEM, , ITS AMAZING AND A LITLE BIT SAD, , IT MADE ME THINK OF MY FAVORITE SONG

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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