For My Dream (Song) Comments

Further examples of nice metaphors - 'dividing the wind' and finding a song on a reed pipe without scales are particularly good. I have to say it's a pity that you can't post the whole song - I take it you do write the music too? Mark

this should me in the lyrics selection ok nice song

In order to improve this you could add at the end the line ' sittin' in the silence...' only it wouldn't be in but my. Thats my thoughts. Otherwise it's nicely written and well done.