Forbidden Knowledge Poem by Rod M.Peters

Forbidden Knowledge

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Ever will Forbidden Knowledge
Give wings to your mind
But your feet will always bind
To the loneliest rock-ledge.

There will bloom the heather
By country-lanes in a wild spree
But your eyes will only see
Thorn-bushes and harsh weather

The Necromancer will always prey
Upon anyone pushing the veil aside;
A thousand snares he will hide
And the bait will throw your way.

Saturday, March 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: knowledge
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 06 September 2017

Nice thought provoking piece embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Very insightful. Thanks for sharing Rod.

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Susan Williams 08 March 2017

Oh! I like this. I like it standing here alone.... but I sense it could be part of an epic book written in verse telling the tales of olden times and bravery true. I like your word choices - every line has such power....10+++++++

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Rod Mendieta 09 March 2017

Susan, you are so intuitive! You're not going to believe it, but this verse is part of a long narrative poem that I wrote in Spanish called 'Los Regentes de las Nubes' ('The Regents in the Clouds') comprised of 7 sections each begining with a short verse. Funny enough, only last week our own Bri Edwards and I were talking about long narrative poems because he sent me one he wrote and I mentioned to him that I had one in Spanish that I might translate into English one of these days! So, yes, you are amazing, but I already knew that...

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San José, Costa Rica
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