Forbidden Love Poem by Trace Skye
Forbidden Love
He knocks down my defences.
Brick by brick I become exposed.
I soften to his words as he moulds me to his needs.
Afraid of what he's created, he can no longer complete the game.
I want you. I need you. I love you he says.
I'll never forget you, ever, he says.
Like an abandoned child, I'm inconsolable.
Broken and alone. I grieve for what seems an eternity.
A forbidden love, not meant to be.
Love this, I think if each statement was given a full stop rather than a comma it would make each one stronger. Give him time to say it with impact rather than in one flow. I want you, I need you, I love you he says,
I soften to his words as he moulds me to his needs. falling into what we should not do can be very serious and bring serious consequences........ thank u dear poetess. tony
I cannot sum up my feelings about this poem other than saying...You spoke my language Trace. Thanks a lot.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Write comment. Such a nice poem, Trace skye. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks