Saturday, April 13, 2013

Forced Upon Me To Live Comments

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Free me,
From this false reality.
Too much I've sacrificed,
For the right...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Hardik Vaidya 13 April 2013

Lawrence S Pertillar wonderful poem. I loved it. Truly. I have one question as a student in awe. Why did you use the word game instead of regime? What was in your mind? By the way not as a student of poetry but as a student of discovery.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

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