Saturday, January 6, 2007

Forenoon Comments

Rating: 5.0

It seems that Sun almost tired burning forever in the vast sky.
He lazily rises for another day.
A flock of birds fly as usual for their daily findings.
Moon hides as she scares to scorch in vain.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 07 January 2007

Beautiful lazy pastoral quality to this one Nimal and a great change of pace in the last line. You never fail to astonish with your original expression and your unusual images. love, Allie xxxxxxxxx

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Sandra Fowler 06 January 2007

I like your sunscape. Very touching write, Nimal. Your mind paints vivid pictures. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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