Forenoon Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Forenoon

Rating: 5.0


It seems that Sun almost tired burning forever in the vast sky.
He lazily rises for another day.
A flock of birds fly as usual for their daily findings.
Moon hides as she scares to scorch in vain.
Struggle of human wake from scratch to fight and notch up their goals.
How many mornings the man has to wake up until he gets his permanent sleep
And to avoid the life’s Beep?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 07 January 2007

Beautiful lazy pastoral quality to this one Nimal and a great change of pace in the last line. You never fail to astonish with your original expression and your unusual images. love, Allie xxxxxxxxx

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Sandra Fowler 06 January 2007

I like your sunscape. Very touching write, Nimal. Your mind paints vivid pictures. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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