Forever Poem by Juan Zumba

Forever

Rating: 2.8


A love is worth much more than a dozen houses
A love is worth more and thats why you are my treasure
I'm worth more with you And I'm very happy your worth more for me
and i said it with my heart

Its worh more a big love that in the sorries have grown today i know that the tears have helped us to be strong and love each other more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 25 July 2008

There are problems all over this writing, but there are none with respect to the presentation of sincerety to the reader. Because I care more about the readers of things rather than the writers, I can give this a score a critic cannot. I can give it the score it really deserves. GW62

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