Thursday, August 14, 2008

Forever Comments

Rating: 3.8

When I look into your eyes,
And see your bright smile,
I feel that you can touch my heart,
When you say that you love me.
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Greenwolfe 1962 14 August 2008

This is written very clearly, but there is not much other than the simple expression to compel a reader to continue on. I wish there was more. It is just too simple. GW62

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