Forever And Always Poem by Jacqueline Montanez

Forever And Always

Rating: 4.5


Here we stand
To face the world;
All our joys and hopes in each other.
And by my side
You will stay
As we learn to trust one another.
Trust me now.
It'll be okay.
We can cry and laugh together.
It brings me peace
To hear you say
You know this will last forever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matthew Harrison 19 August 2009

You're structure's fantastic. And your ability to transcend lines with your message is exceptional. Good piece.

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Tyrone Wingfield 19 August 2009

Love is most beautiful when it is young, and the strongest when you think it'll last forever, just hold on to them and pray they never leave... Amazing poem, keep it up

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Travis Johnson 25 August 2009

yeah its nice. cant wait til ur next one

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Anusha Subramanian 26 September 2009

Wow.. good one.. keep up ur work..

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Kjxnhvkzdh Vnhcjfh 25 September 2009

beautiful beautiful and once agine beautiful keep it up

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Shekhar Joshi 05 September 2009

beautiful.....on trust stands the whole relationship......hopefully yours last forever........ good one.....

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Sans Serif 31 August 2009

Like I said, heart and soul. It's beautiful. I really liked it.

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Daniel Wheeler 28 August 2009

hmm. cheesy but good. like romantically cheesy but i dig it.

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