Friday, May 24, 2013

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It's all so quiet
but suddenly so loud
she sits silently
then fidgets then crouch
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Wardah Arshad
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Farah Ilyas 03 June 2013

so touching & moving poem about the painful suffering of a girl well written quite an artistic way...keep writing

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 May 2013

So sad about her and the family/ you should have mention the stupid society where this events took place / once we are a part of society then //.....well write but write to for the universal message i would be better

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Wardah Arshad

Wardah Arshad

Riyadh, Saudi Arabia
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